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Lot 41

by Casey (link)

Genre romance
Pairings Zac/OFC
Length 8 chapters
Status Completed

Lot 41 is a story that I was hoping would have a bit of potential and it did but not enough for me to say that it’s the best story out there. It’s very teenyish and maybe that’s because of the era it was written in. I felt it could read like a typical romantic comedy. Zac and Austin meet at the bar she works at called Lot 41(where the title comes from).

Austin of course has a rule she will never get with a customer and as you can guess she breaks it because she agrees to meet up with Zac after getting off work. Of course though all they do is kiss. The sex happens in another part of the story but between the kiss and the sex we see Zac and Austin’s relationship grow via instant messages. If it was a story written now I’d expect at least skype but it was written during the days when instant messages was the way to go.

I really did like Zac and Austin’s relationship but the dialogue was too cheesy for my taste and the fact that they seemed to be addicted to sex was a huge turn off, not to mention a part of me wishes the sex scenes had been more in depth.

I feel for a story written when it was it was probably good but now it’s just kind of too cheesy and too cliche though with a bit of editing and better dialogue I think it could be really great.

Review by Elizabeth (tumblr)